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英语六级作文分类 比较对照预测范文及点评 17:选择职业

Topic 17 Choosing a Career

选择职业是人生的大事

选择职业时应考虑的因素

我的观点

Choosing a Career

Choosing a career is of great importance in modem society,which may affect the whole course of our life. According to a recent survey conducted by China Daily,a high proportion (98. 5 percent) of people ask around their friends and families before they make a choice.
Many factors need to be taken into consideration in choosing a job. In the first place,you must consider the salary offered, the bene-fits provided and the opportunity to get promotion. What’s more, you should carefully analyze the job you want to choose to decide whether it is suitable for you and whether you are capable to do it. Above all,the job you are considering should appeal to your interest so that you may devote a full heart to it.
As for me,we can’t be too anxious in hunting for the job. Most importantly,we should better equip ourselves with knowledge and skills, so we can get the satisfactory job. (159 词)

一句话点评

该句中的数据以及大写字母首先吸引了阅卷老师的眼球,同 时 conduct, a high proportion of, ask around, make a choice 等单词 及短语的使用极大地增加了该句的亮点。

快捷构思

第一段:描述现象,引人该段中心“选择职业是人生的大事”。 而后“一句话”数例说明这种状况的严重性。
第二段:首先提出该段主题句“选择职业时应考虑许多因素' 紧接着用 In the first place, What’s more, Above all 等 结构连接词组分别具体阐述选择职业时要考虑的因 素,结构清晰,条理清楚。
第三段:直接用As for me引出个人的观点,简单明了地指出选 择职业时不能太着急,我们应该首先装备好自己的知 识和技能,这样我们才能找到满意的工作。使用Most importantly起到了强调的作用,吸引人的注意力。

美丽词句

1.ask around到处打听

2.make a choice 选择

3.capable有能力的

4.appeal to对···有吸引力

5.devote a full heart to 全身心地投人