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英语六级作文分类 比较对照预测范文及点评 18:在中国拥有私家车的看法

Topic 18 My View on Owning Private Cars in China

在中国,越来越多的人拥有私家车

分析原因

可能会带来的问题

My View on Owning Private Cars in China

Nowadays,more and more people own private cars. According to a recent survey conducted by CCTV, the past 5 years has wit-nessed a sharp increase in the number of private cars to an aston-ishing number of 175,280,000.
To account for this phenomenon, people have come up with vari-ous reasons listed below. To begin with, there has been great improve-ment in people’s living standards in the past decade. Thus, many peo-ple choose more comfortable means of traveling over bicycles or motor-cycles. What’s more,to enjoy in the open-air by short journey at week-ends is becoming a fashion especially among young people, which to a large extent stimulates a boom of private car.
However, private cars also sive rise to a number of problems. On the one hand,with so many cars running on street,traffic jams appeared and accident increased. On the other hand,people are start-ing to complain of the smoke and pollution given off by cars. (157 词)

“一句话”点评

该句中的数据以及大写字母CCTV首先吸引阅卷老师的眼球,同时 conduct, a sharp increase, to an astonishing number of 等单词及 短语的使用极大地增加了该句的亮点。

快捷构思

第一段:描述现象,指出中国现在越来越多的人拥有私家车的 现象,接着以“一句话”数例进行补充论证。
第二段:分析产生这种现象的原因,分别以To begin with和 What’s more来引出,条理相当清晰,而且分析原因也 很透彻。
第三段:首先概括性地指出这种现象会引起一些问题;接着分 别用 On the one hand 和 On the other hand 来具体引出 可能会产生的两方面的影响。

美丽词句

1.to a large extent在很大程度上

2.stimulate 刺激,激励

3.a boom of激增,繁荣

4.give rise to 引起,导致