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英语六级作文分类 比较对照预测范文及点评 18:在中国拥有私家车的看法

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Topic 18 My View on Owning Private Cars in China

在中国,越来越多的人拥有私家车

分析原因

可能会带来的问题

My View on Owning Private Cars in China

Nowadays,more and more people own private cars. According to a recent survey conducted by CCTV, the past 5 years has wit-nessed a sharp increase in the number of private cars to an aston-ishing number of 175,280,000.
To account for this phenomenon, people have come up with vari-ous reasons listed below. To begin with, there has been great improve-ment in people’s living standards in the past decade. Thus, many peo-ple choose more comfortable means of traveling over bicycles or motor-cycles. What’s more,to enjoy in the open-air by short journey at week-ends is becoming a fashion especially among young people, which to a large extent stimulates a boom of private car.
However, private cars also sive rise to a number of problems. On the one hand,with so many cars running on street,traffic jams appeared and accident increased. On the other hand,people are start-ing to complain of the smoke and pollution given off by cars. (157 词)

“一句话”点评

该句中的数据以及大写字母CCTV首先吸引阅卷老师的眼球,同时 conduct, a sharp increase, to an astonishing number of 等单词及 短语的使用极大地增加了该句的亮点。

快捷构思

第一段:描述现象,指出中国现在越来越多的人拥有私家车的 现象,接着以“一句话”数例进行补充论证。
第二段:分析产生这种现象的原因,分别以To begin with和 What’s more来引出,条理相当清晰,而且分析原因也 很透彻。
第三段:首先概括性地指出这种现象会引起一些问题;接着分 别用 On the one hand 和 On the other hand 来具体引出 可能会产生的两方面的影响。

美丽词句

1.to a large extent在很大程度上

2.stimulate 刺激,激励

3.a boom of激增,繁荣

4.give rise to 引起,导致