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英语六级作文分类 比较对照预测范文及点评 19:独生子女面临的问题

来源:慢速英语   时间:1970-01-01 08:00:00

Topic 19 Problems Single Child Confronts

如今独生子女越来越多

独生子女进入大学后,面临一些问题

如何解决

Problems Single Child Confronts

Nowadays,one-child family is becoming dominant in the society. According to a recent survey conducted by China Daily, the past 10 years has witnessed a sharp increase in the percentage of single-child family from 24.5 to 85.9.
When single children attend universities, they may confront some problems. To begin with,though most of these college students are intelligent and fond of study,some are comparatively less capable of han-dling their social and living affairs. When they meet something unexpect-ed ,they don’t know how to solve it. What is more,single children tend to have a strong self-centered sense and may easily neglect others,thoughts and needs, which hampers the establishment of true friendship.
To solve these problems,we should not blame all this on them. It is not their own faults to be like this because they are inevitable prod-ucts of certain times. Instead, we should sincerely help them be aware of their shortcomings and adjust themselves to college life and to the society. (163 词)

“一句话”点评

该句中的数据以及大写字母首先吸引了阅卷老师的眼球,同句的亮点。

快捷构思

第一段:描述现象,引入该段中心“如今独生子女越来越多”。而后“一句话”数例说明这种状况的严重性。
第二段:首先提出该段主题句“独生子女进人大学后,面临一 些问题”。紧接着用结构连接词组To begin with,What’s more分别具体阐述该问题,结构清晰。
第三段:首先用表目的的介词结构To solve these problems引出 解决的方法,然后使用了 we should not ...和Instead, we should ...从两方面进行具体阐述,论证有力Ddominant优势的,占统治地位的

美丽词句

1.comparatively比较地,相当地

2.hamper妨碍,束缚

3.blame (on)指责,责怪