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英语六级作文分类 比较对照预测范文及点评 14:毕业生就业与失业

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Topic 14 Unemployment of College Graduates

大学生失业已经成为严重的社会问题

分析原因

给出解决问题的办法

Unemployment of College Graduates

With the fierce competition of job market, the unemployment of college graduates is becoming a big concern of the whole society. According to a recent survey conducted by the National Employ-ment Ministry, the number of unemployed graduates increased sharply from 280,000 to 750,000 between 2000 and 2006.

To account for this phenomenon, various reasons can be listed below. To begin with, the shortage of positions results from the fact that supply of labor exceeds the demand. The enrollment of college students has grown by more than 30 percent annually since 1998 while our annual GDP growth has been about 8 percent. What’s more,many graduates do not want to work in small cities or towns. Instead,too many of them crowd in big cities like Beijing and Shanghai.

Serious as the problem seems, we can take some measures to deal with it. On the one hand, the government should develop our national economy more rapidly, creating more job opportunities. On the other hand, the college students must be realistic in choosing jobs. Only in these ways can we hope to solve the problem. (183 词)

“一句话”点评

第一段的数据将吸引阅卷老师的眼球,同时还使用了 conducted, increased sharply等好词及短语,并以conducted引导的分词短 语作后置定语,给阅卷老师留下良好的第一印象。

快捷构思

第一段:描述现象,引人该段中心“大学生失业巳经成为严重 的社会问题”。而后“一句话”数例说明大学毕业生无 法就业的具体的严峻形势。
第二段:开门见山提出该段主题句“大学毕业生无法就业有多 方面的原因”。紧接着用To begin with, What’s more 引出解释这种现象的两方面原因,条理清晰。
第三段:先总起一句指出“尽管这个问题相当严重,但是我们 可以采取一些措施来解决。”之后,分别用on the one hand和on the other hand指出两方面的措施D最后以 only引导的倒装句式表明这样做的必要性。

美丽词句

1.fierce competition 激烈的竞争

2.account for 解释,说明

3.realistic现实的,实际可行的