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【托福写作】托福写作范文大全及高分范文分析

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经典的TOEFL写作范文无疑是写作考试备考中最有价值的参考材料。 但是,许多考生并不知道如何正确使用优秀的范文来快速提高他们的写作能力。接下来,小编将告诉您托福写作范文大全及高分范文分析。


托福高分范文大全:


Which one do you prefer, to solve problems on your own experience and knowledge, or to ask others for advice?


您更喜欢哪一种,以您自己的经验和知识解决问题,或向他人寻求建议?


As knowledge and experience serve as twim towers in problem-solving, one is often presented with two major paths that pave the way for final fulfillment, eitther to wrack his brain, just like what happened to Neuton, siiting for many years under an apple tree and eventually figuring out ond of the greatest universal rules that govern the whole globe, or to seek for others’ widsom through their advice, just as in the case of Benjinin Franklin, gathering great minds under one roof and then establishing a most world-renown libray. Both ways work. When a practical goal is involved, however, Benjimin Franklin may best be regareded as a role model in this respect and asking people for advice often turn out to be the prime alternative.


由于知识和经验是解决问题的万能塔,经常给人们提供两条主要途径,这些途径为最终实现铺平了道路,更像是让诺顿发生了事一样动脑筋,在苹果树下呆了很多年并最终找出统治整个地球的最伟大的通用规则,或通过他们的建议来寻求他人的智慧,就像本金宁·富兰克林一样,在一个屋檐下集思广益,然后建立举世闻名的libray。两种方式都可以。但是,当涉及到实际目标时,本杰明·富兰克林最好以此作为榜样,并向人们征求意见通常是最佳的选择。


Experience and knowledge borrowed or learned from others’ advice contribute greatly to effectiveness and effeciency for a goal-accomplishment. Not all experience and knowledge related to problem-solving can be obtained by personal effort alone due to limitations of mind and capabilities of each individual. A single thought in someone’s mind is, more often than not, far less shining compared with group’s wisdom. That explains the famous old saying that one sees further when standing upon the shoulders’ of past great giants; that explains why a great leader is always with greater minds; that also explains why teamwork in corperation is highly emphasized in the 21st century. Brainstorm and exchange of ideas between different thoughts never fail to enhance capabilities of each individula involved, a team, a company, an institution, a country, or even the entire global village.

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从他人的建议中借鉴或学习的经验和知识极大地有助于实现目标的有效性和效率。由于每个人的思想和能力的局限性,并非所有的解决问题的经验和知识都只能靠个人的努力获得。与小组成员的智慧相比,在某人头脑中的单一想法通常会少很多。这解释了著名的古老谚语:站在过去的巨人的肩膀上时,人们会看到更多;这就解释了为什么一个伟大的领导者总是怀有更大的胸怀;这也解释了为什么在21世纪高度重视公司团队合作。在不同思想之间进行头脑风暴和思想交流,绝不会提高每个参与人员,团队,公司,机构,国家,甚至整个地球村的能力。


Asking others’ advice instead of getting everything done on one’s own promotes democracy and communication too. In terms of democracy, it is necessary to give others rights and chances to speak since the problem may concern them in different ways, and their saying in turn reflects our respect toward freedom of speech as well as their wisdom. In terms of communication, idea exchange sometimes focuses more than solutions, and hereby better mutual understanding about perspectives, principles, praticalities and personalities of each other.


征求别人的意见而不是独自完成所有事情,也会促进民主和沟通。在民主方面,有必要给予他人发言权和机会,因为问题可能以不同的方式涉及到他们,而他们的话语反过来又反映了我们对言论自由和智慧的尊重。在交流方面,思想交流有时关注的重点不只是解决方案,因此可以更好地相互理解彼此的观点,原则,实用性和个性。


从托福写作范文中吸取的高分经验:


第1步,通读30篇高分范文,注意寻找文章的写作思路和主要论点,把握整体框架。以《托福高分范文大全》中的文章为例,2013年6月15日考题:


The way a person dresses in is a good indication of his/her personality and character.通读此文时,应找到文章主要论点:1.着装习惯反映个人偏好;2.着装习惯透露了性格的某些方面;3.除了着装习惯,行为和举止是性格的更真实体现。


第2步,精读10篇范文,理清每句话之间的关系。如:Relatives were co-habitants inside a large house where more intimate relationships could be stably maintained and carried on. Nowadays, however, nuclear families are taking up the greatest ratio of social build-up... 这两句话之间形成了转折的逻辑关系。


第3步,详细分析10篇范文,弄懂每句话内部的关系以及每句话之间的关系。如:In addition, obsessed with computer games, children are gradually becoming slaves under the control of the pre-designed game modes. As a matter of fact, it is not only a waste of time, but may also considerably mislead children mentally... 在这段话中,标志词in addition表明首句承前启后,该句中,过去分词短语obssessed with... 表原因,children are usually...是原因所导致的结果。第二句是对首句的进一步解释说明,注意not only...but also... 这个典型句式的应用。


第4步,选取经过详细分析的10篇范文题目进行仿写练习。


第5步,再选取另外10道题目进行写作练习,完成后与范文对照,寻找自己的优点与不足之处。


链接:

托福独立写作高分范文30篇汇总

托福写作25分难考吗