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【托福写作】19年2月23日托福写作题目回顾及范文分享

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在已经结束的2019年托福写作考试中,考生普遍反馈2月份的考题有些难度,得分不高,那么为了给即将参加托福写作考试的大家作为参考,今天就给大家带来19年2月23日托福写作题目回顾及范文分享,希望对大家有帮助。


考试日期:


2019.2.23


Task 1


INTEGRATED


综合写作


对土星的卫星Titan有3个unusual features的解释 。


阅读给出三种观点:


1. unusual orbit 普通的卫星运转是circular环形的轨道,但是Titan卫星运转时是 elliptical orbit椭圆轨道;


2. unusual orbit 其它的卫星运转是circular环形的轨道;


3. Titan上沙丘的坡向与Titan所吹的风向相反;


听力逐一反驳:


1. Titan上沙丘的坡向与Titan所吹的风向相反;


2. 洼地和坑并不是由于火山碰撞造成的,而是强降雨导致的;


3. 关于沙丘的朝向。Titan上的沙子很重,一般的风吹不动。Titan每年会有几次风力很大的朝东吹的风暴storms,它的风力是平常风的十倍,可以将沙子往东吹。


Task 2   INDEPENDENT  独立写作


话题类别


教育类


考题文字:


Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?


It is difficult for a teacher to be both popular (well-liked) and effective in helping students in learning.

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参考范文:


As one of most respectable professions in current society, teachers are more than devoted knowledge conveyors, but cultivate interest and motivations of study for the young generation. However, an increasing number of people hold the view that it is hard for instructors to be both popular and effective in helping students in learning, which i can hardly consent to.


作为当今社会最受尊敬的职业之一,教师不仅是专门的知识传播者,而且还为年轻一代培养了学习的兴趣和动机。但是,越来越多的人认为,教员很难既受欢迎又不能有效地帮助学生学习,这是我很难同意的。


To begin with, teachers’ popularity, to a large extent, can reflect their academic achievement, helping students to perform well in study. That is to say, in order to be popular, what teachers should emphasize is not only catering to their students blindly, but helping students to become successful in academia. This is especially true for students who have their own awareness and purpose in study, so they are capable to obtain knowledge in a short term from teachers. For example, as a student learning TOFEL, I desire to acquire some practical skills to pass the exam and every course should deserve the high pay. Thus, when choosing teachers in class, I prefer to attend the classes held by teachers with strong academic ability instead of humorous teaching style, albeit the latter can also adjust class atmosphere. In light of this, only when a schoolmaster can teach students effectively can he get upsurge of popularity among students, meaning efficient instruction is the precondition of being popular for any teacher.


首先,教师的受欢迎程度在很大程度上可以反映他们的学业成就,从而帮助学生在学习中表现出色。就是说,要成为大众,教师要强调的不仅是盲目迎合学生,而且要帮助学生在学术界取得成功。对于在学习中具有自己的意识和目标的学生来说尤其如此,因此他们能够在短期内从老师那里获得知识。例如,作为一名学习TOFEL的学生,我希望获得一些实践技能以通过考试,并且每门课程都应得到高额的报酬。因此,在选择班主任时,我更喜欢参加学术能力强的老师的课堂,而不是幽默的教学方式,尽管后者也可以调节课堂气氛。有鉴于此,只有当校长能够有效地教给学生时,他才能在学生中受到青睐,这意味着有效的教学是任何老师都受青睐的前提。


In addition, teachers with popular acclaim are more likely to evoke students’ motivation and enthusiasm in study, thus helping them to achieve good academic performance. The factors why teachers are popular can be categorized into various aspects, including the humorous style, passion and responsibility, all of which exert positive influence on children. To be exact, if a teacher is funny and interesting, it is highly possible that students show more willingness to attend the class and concentrate on what teachers inform. This character radiates an infectious enthusiasm for students who consider this class is so intriguing that students don’t have to force themselves to listen, meaning that they can involuntarily get involved


此外,广受赞誉的老师更有可能激发学生的学习动机和学习热情,从而帮助他们取得良好的学习成绩。教师受人欢迎的因素可以分为各个方面,包括幽默的风格,热情和责任感,所有这些对孩子产生积极的影响。确切地说,如果一位老师有趣而有趣,那么学生很有可能表现出更多愿意参加课堂并专注于老师所提供的信息。这个角色向那些认为这堂课很有趣的学生散发出感染性的热情,以至于学生不必强迫自己听,意味着他们可以不由自主地参与进来。


Admittedly, it is far from easy to achieve both points, especially for new teachers without sufficient and diverse teaching methods. Hence, at the beginning of their work, they overemphasize the needs of individual students, but fail to achieve flexibility in teaching, which results in the loss of popularity among students. But teachers can gradually cultivate this awareness, use better teaching methods to enrich their teaching style, and help students learn effectively.


诚然,要达到这两个目标绝非易事,特别是对于没有足够多样的教学方法的新教师。因此,他们在开始工作时就过分强调了个别学生的需求,但未能在教学中实现灵活性,这导致学生之间的知名度下降。但是教师可以逐步培养这种意识,使用更好的教学方法来丰富他们的教学风格,并帮助学生有效地学习。


In conclusion, despite the difficulty in possessing popularity and effectiveness in teaching students, it is my view that both are indispensable for teachers to be successful in education. After continuous practice and experience accumulation, a popular teacher can help students learn effectively.


总而言之,尽管很难在教学中拥有知名度和有效性,但我认为对于教师而言,成功地进行教学是不可或缺的。经过不断的实践和经验积累,一位受欢迎的老师可以帮助学生有效地学习。


本次写作考试点评:


本次新托福考试完全重复2018年4月21日大陆考题,总体来说写作稍有难度,主要是写清楚老师如何实现两者,注意条理和审题。


参考思路:


观点:不同意,老师可以同时做到这两点。


理由段一:老师受欢迎程度与他们的学术成就和课堂授课有直接相关性。


理由段二:受欢迎的老师更能激发学生的学习兴趣,帮助他们有效学习。


让步段:同时做到这两点确实不容易,但是老师要慢慢培养这方面的意识,运用更好的教学方法丰富自己的教学风格,帮助学生有效地学习。

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